UK Standards

My essay

lecturer's comments was

content : a number of thoughtful points - good.

organisation : the arguement structure could be tighter ~ you wander around a bit.

spelling, grammer & refs : mostly quite well writer. refs should be included in the end.

and guess what? my score is 66. not even a first.

=.=

she took marks off for writing

Machines doesnt

instead of

Machines dont

lovely.

but at least i'm considered an ok writer ha ha. heck with the marks. =.=